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Natsu nii
Posts : 118
Join date : 2009-12-10
Age : 31
Location : Amerika! (i like it better that way... )
 |  Subject: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-"  Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:25 pm | |
| Black wings
(no i'm not suicidal, this is just a poem i wrote)
Words escape my lips as I breathe my last breath.
The concept of separation doth lament.
The song of my life dances in my head.
To be no more to me is dread.
To be a crow as black as night.
To see his face stricken in delight.
Torture is the word.
To be sewed away, just as a bird.
I float overhead, the others lead me away.
I could not have lived another day.
To escape this world of cheating and denial.
I suppose this is how it feels to be suicidal.
He cheated on me with her, you see.
And with that single black drop, I cease to be.
I’ll glide away with my new black wings.
The song of life I refuse sing. | |
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Yagami-kun
Admin
Posts : 88
Join date : 2009-12-04
Age : 31
Location : Here, there, everywhere...i'm just that omniscient
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Sat Dec 12, 2009 2:15 pm | |
| Lol...my sis read this and said you were emo. >.< I said nope...your Natsu.
Great poem...maybe i should put mine up *sigh* | |
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Katsuno
Posts : 52
Join date : 2009-12-11
Age : 32
Location : My room
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:18 pm | |
| WOOOW thats deep
I LIKE IT | |
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Meerkat
Posts : 20
Join date : 2009-12-10
Age : 30
Location : engalnd......i think
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:45 am | |
| i wrote this one ages ago but felt like putting it up
I am here.
Even if you don't know me,
You can not deny my existence,
My heart is racing,
He is chacing,
I am here.
You turn your back,
You close your eyes,
To my cries of pain,
As the blade rips through my flesh,
I am here.
Only when my cries die down,
Do you open your eyes,
My life is gone,
But my body remains,
As guilt runs thriugh your heart,
I am here. | |
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Yagami-kun
Admin
Posts : 88
Join date : 2009-12-04
Age : 31
Location : Here, there, everywhere...i'm just that omniscient
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Wed Jan 06, 2010 10:14 am | |
| WHOO!!! HEATHER YEAH!!!!  awesome poem ^_^ | |
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Meerkat
Posts : 20
Join date : 2009-12-10
Age : 30
Location : engalnd......i think
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Thu Jan 07, 2010 9:59 am | |
| thanks  i should really start writing poems again | |
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Natsu nii
Posts : 118
Join date : 2009-12-10
Age : 31
Location : Amerika! (i like it better that way... )
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Mon Jan 11, 2010 5:18 pm | |
| yeah, good job on the poem it almost sounds like you could turn it into a song! X3 | |
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Meerkat
Posts : 20
Join date : 2009-12-10
Age : 30
Location : engalnd......i think
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:38 am | |
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Natsu nii
Posts : 118
Join date : 2009-12-10
Age : 31
Location : Amerika! (i like it better that way... )
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:18 pm | |
| yeah!
it sounds like something evanescnce,
The brilliant green or 38th parallel would do. ^^" | |
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Meerkat
Posts : 20
Join date : 2009-12-10
Age : 30
Location : engalnd......i think
| | Subject: Re: a poem on death...(cheery) -_-" Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:46 am | |
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